Saturday, 12 April 2014

NaPoWriMo Catch-up 6: What's Happening Outside?

Woman in the car park out the back
carries hoover, ankle-harried by two dogs
that might be bichons, might be westies,

bends inside car door with vacuum-hose, 
sucks clean upholstered hatchback,
and only then picks up each pup
for vehicular deposit.

This seems lopsided:
but who am I to rule on others' Sundays?

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